Time and Time again... Time after Time...
The latest Time magazine (Asian edition, June 19) has a section on Remaking India. One of the articles is by Alex Perry (who has made it a habit of displaying his ignorance in his stories). Alex Perry is what I refer to as a sorry journalist. I think his sense of observation is too narrow for a journalist... and clearly he has fallen into a trap. Of shallowness. Thats the worst kind of trap for a journo. If you read his previous India centric stories, you would know what I mean. However, the story in question can be found at http://www.time.com/time/asia/covers/501060619/bombay.html.
I do not agree with most of his observations. And for the nth time, wrote my opinions to the editor. (I have had a few published in the past - like my disapproval of Perry's oo la la's about Aishwarya Rai). Here goes:
Dear Sir,
In City of Dreams (Time, June 19, 2006), Alex Perry sings an oft sung song, but sadly out of tune. First of all, the city is called Mumbai. And this change is not just a matter of nomenclature, but something deep rooted. Next, Perry has drawn his conclusion of Bombay and its possibilities by using examples like Sula's Samant, billionaire stock investor Jhunjhunwala and model Yana Gupta. This looks like the easy way out. A population of 18.4 million and an addition of 200 a day. And Perry could not find even one 'normal' person to interview. The 18.4 million he is referring to is poorly represented.
More than 7 years ago, I was one of that 200 added to the city. And so were my friends. We know what it was like to come to Bombay with 'dreams', albeit varied ones. I fell in love with Bombay when I visited a friend for a holiday. Having spent a few years prior to that in sleepy Bangalore, I promptly knew that Bombay was the only city in India that could match my energy levels. And we roughed it out. I'm not the only one who spent nights going hungry due to a light wallet. I have friends who came to Bombay to make it big in Bollywood. Some ended up modeling for a while, and then getting breaks in TV, while the others went back to their hometowns. Therefore your choice of Yana Gupta seems weird. Indians have been known to be welcoming of the 'gori madam' for centuries. Clearly, it was easier for her to make it big in Bombay's show business than the other aspirants. Lets not get into reasons. Samant, on the other hand (as Perry mentioned) is a son of privilege. Perry says that Bombay takes all comers – but he does not take us into the life of one.
I left Bombay last year to pursue an MBA in Singapore. On my farewell day, I cried like I lost a loved one. I was upset to leave the city I loved so much. I complete my program in November, and doubt I will go back to Bombay in the near future. I agree that it is pointless to compare Singapore to Bombay. But, it is everybody's right to choose a good life for himself. No matter who you are, Yana or Priya, you still spend hours in traffic, get covered in soot, breathe polluted and foul air, suffer acute noise pollution and get jostled by beggars. The sight of a Bollywood superstar stuck in his car during the last Bombay monsoon is proof to it. The first rain this year and the subsequent flooding and traffic problems proved that the city has been sleeping since the last monsoon. I'll miss my friends. But I won't miss Bombay... the city of 'crumbling' dreams.
And finally, in 1991, alcohol was not a sin. Alcohol will never be sin in India. Hooch was not the closest thing to a sophisticated intoxicant. What do you think Indians were drinking? For the sake of dramatization, please don't make it look like Indians had no choice. Samant's target group for his wine have always had a choice in India… maybe not wine.
11 Comments:
completely agree with your thoughts on the article...journos really need to put in the rigours of their profession before putting something like this out...lazy effort... on the contrary some articles on Kolkata seem to be very well researched by firangi journos...mumbai should be easier to dissect because of the visibilty.
I think it's a very good piece. I've lived in Mumbai/Bombay for 4 years and it gets it spot on. And he seems to have spoken to loads of people. The truth is that the laziest sort of journalism is "the man in the street stuff." Stop 3 and you've got your story -- it'll take perhaps 15 minutes. Perry seems to have taken the trouble to track down people who are either qualified to talk in some way, or who have a unique perspective. Plus, for something like this, Time will have spoken to many more people than they quote.
Are you kidding? I've yet to read a firangi journo who understandz da first thing about Bharat. An dis soundz like u work for Time.
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Well, I don't live in Mumbai. I live in Mangalore. And Time did a piece on Mangalore in the latest edition where the writer takes a schoolboy dreamlike look at Mangalore and makes it sound like the next happening city.
http://www.time.com/time/asia/covers/501060619/mangalore.html
Well, contrary to the writer, there is only 1 functional mall in Mangalore, and 2 that are still under construction or waiting for occupancy. There are 3 or 4 pubs/bars in Mangalore, frequented mainly by men giving it a feel of “gay bars”- as some of my company's international clients remarked. They have also maintained that this city doesn't have a decent international hotel or restaurant. Totally contrary to what the article says.
The anonymous people of the world will argue, “Why listen to the frickin’ firangs?” Well, a firangi magazine has published this article.
Now, Time has said Mangalore is a city where people rave unto the night because the writer who is an expert on Indian economics and city planning, because of having previously lived in Mangalore. Ergo, he did not have to "interview a broad section of people" because of his knowledge of the city and possibly having read Amartya Sen’s books. For someone to say that Yana Gupta is qualified to comment on Mumbai, is equivalent to saying that Mallika Sherawat is an automatic replacement for Meryl Streep. I hear a few why not’s. It is because reality beats fiction any day.
If writers want to romanticize about cities they like, they can do so on personal blogs. Not in magazines that we pay good money for and expect unbiased reviews. We have watched The Matrix. Time doesn’t need to pull the wool further down our eyes.
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A better piece on Mumbai can be written with these 3 things- google, a copy of maximum city by suketu mehta, and a copy of shantaram.
I dont even know if Rajeev is 39, methinks he's closer to 35. (I've met him 1ce or 2ce)
I loved the line about 'living large'- he has a chauffer and a manservant. Erm, so do I. You'd think that Perry would have the brain to figure out that in a city of 18.4 million, of which 6 million or whatever are in slums and 2 million don't have clean drinking water, a chauffer and a maid, a cook, a dhobhi etc do not comprise living large. And how dance bars are the only 'overground sex industry'. Huh??
shantaram is awful. Total Western armchair traveler 'India chaos is exotic and romantic' shite. I much prefer this piece. I've been to Bombay and this feels pretty accurate
Well Anonymous, I can't comment on Shantaram as I haven't read it. Maybe Bowen Arrow would want to...
Dear Anonymous,
gregory wasnt a traveller. he lived here for a good many years, and still does. if you are ever in the colaba area, you may even bump into him. secondly, my comment wasnt on the quality of the book, but since you brought it up, ill disagree with you.
Nicely written! I can symphatize with you as I myself came from a country (i.e. Philippines)with somehow similar situation. I have been to Singapore and other countries as well and I can't help but compare my country with those countries everytime I go back home. I love my country no doubt about it and I definitely know its history better than people like Perry. I should say that I also cried when I read you cried when you left Mumbai...I am a very sentimental person and could easily connect with the feelings of people even through readings...Responsible journalism may be the course that Perry skipped when he was in college....
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